2011년 1월 18일 화요일

Diamonte Poem- Kids and Adults

little kids
innocence, unconsciousness
playing,  laughting,  enjoying
loose,  cute,  smart,  strict
working, studying, caring
seriousness, consciousness
adults

2011년 1월 16일 일요일

Diamente Poem- Devil and angel

                                                    Devil                                                                      
                                              evil,  untruthful                                                           
                                      lying,  tempting,  cheating                                                                     
          leading people to a bad ways, leading people to a good ways                                                                                         
                                      helping, loving, caring                                                                                           
                                            truthful, kindness                                                                                  
                                                    Angle                                                                               
                                                                                                                                   
                                                                                                                                   
                                                                                                                                   

2011년 1월 11일 화요일

Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter... and Spring



     I think that the lesson monk is trying to teach was to acknoledge the youn monk that everything, every living creatures are important and that they shouldn't kill them or do anything bad to them and they shoul respect them and we should understand that even f it is a really small it still lives and feels things
just like people.
     In the mivie the boy tied rock and string around a fish, snake and a frog. At first he just did it for his own entertainment for his own happiness and joy, and  the monk caught him doing such things and let him realize the pain, by doing exectly the same thing that the boy has done tothe other creatures. He made him him realize the pain, heaviness and tiredness, but also how it can hurt your feeling to make the other creatures hurt or to kill. Through the real experience that the monk has given him, having stones aroud him, the boy learned and felt how much the creatures would have been suffer until they die (for fish and for snake's case). Trough the monk's lesson he learned that he should respect other creatures.
     The monk said that if he would suffer from the thing that the old monk has done to the little monk then the small creatures would suffer from having the rocks around them and  not being able to move too,  and he said that if any of them die rhen he wouldn't have an actual rock around him but he would have rock on his heart. I think that what he had said was real. He (the little monk) wouln't acutally have the ock around him but he would suffer from the guilitiness of what he had done to them.
     The lesson he had given to the littele monk was quite harsh but I think that it was a good lesson for him though. I think that he should experience that kind of punishment for once. He felt exactly like tha other small creatures  and he knew it was wrong. He got punished not only phisically but also in his heart. He must have been very sad and realized what he had done that wasn't a very nice thing to do the little creature.
     Personally I don't have that kind of experience, so I don't really what it feels like to be tied up with the rock and can't move. However I wouldn't be very happy with the puishment but I think it would be worth trying.

2011년 1월 7일 금요일

Writig Chain "Smoking must be stopped" by Class 24, Jenny

     Hello peple who are reading my essay~ my classmates and I made this Essay on Smoking and I hope you guys enjoy my essay.  It was our first time writing the writing chain so I didn't expect something really good but I think ours was okay.
     Smoking must be stopped. In the past people thought that smoking is nice,and cool, but nwadays we know that is bad to smoke , so in may public places people can't smoke, and people who do smoke are't treated very nicely. Smoking is really bad, because it's not good for your own health ad it also efects the people who are with you.
     The problem that we get from smoking is he diseases in our lungs and respiratory system. When we compare the lungs of two different people, one who does not smoke and one who smoke, the non smoker's lungs are clean, However the addicted smoker's lungs were black.
     If you smoke too much your body would smell like cigarettes you would have a bad odor in your mounth
even if you bush your teeth. In addition your teeth would become yellwish black becaue of the tar in the cigar
     More over it gives unpleasant first expressin to the people. For example, if someone goes to a job interviw, smelling like cigar it wuld give a very nice first expression to the people who interview you and when you have a smoker in your house the your house would smell like cigar and the house would be full of the cigar's smell. Cigars effects the people who does not smoke in the same way as they do smoke, and the family members wouldn't like that. The cigar doesn't go down, and stay at your body.
     The cigarette contains a  lot ofbad materials, such as nicitine and tarr, which could cause a lung cancer.
A lot of people who smoke has a cancer. Cancer is a very dangerous disease. Many people died due to the caner. Smoking can lead us to many other Cancers too. Due to the fact that many people died because of those diseases the docters suggested them to quit smoking .
        Lastly smoing could effect not only you but also your family. When you get married and get a baby the baby sometimes come out in the nomal forms that the others do. It might be better if it only effect you, but it can also effect others and if they are your close friend or even your own children  you would be unhappy and so would the others, and it would be a selfish and not a very smart thing to get other people to hurt.
     Therefore you(people who smoke) should stop smoking. You can go to a cetre or places that can help you quit it. So it's really not good to smoke and if you are smoking you should quit it.