Writig Chain "Smoking must be stopped" by Class 24, Jenny

     Hello peple who are reading my essay~ my classmates and I made this Essay on Smoking and I hope you guys enjoy my essay.  It was our first time writing the writing chain so I didn't expect something really good but I think ours was okay.
     Smoking must be stopped. In the past people thought that smoking is nice,and cool, but nwadays we know that is bad to smoke , so in may public places people can't smoke, and people who do smoke are't treated very nicely. Smoking is really bad, because it's not good for your own health ad it also efects the people who are with you.
     The problem that we get from smoking is he diseases in our lungs and respiratory system. When we compare the lungs of two different people, one who does not smoke and one who smoke, the non smoker's lungs are clean, However the addicted smoker's lungs were black.
     If you smoke too much your body would smell like cigarettes you would have a bad odor in your mounth
even if you bush your teeth. In addition your teeth would become yellwish black becaue of the tar in the cigar
     More over it gives unpleasant first expressin to the people. For example, if someone goes to a job interviw, smelling like cigar it wuld give a very nice first expression to the people who interview you and when you have a smoker in your house the your house would smell like cigar and the house would be full of the cigar's smell. Cigars effects the people who does not smoke in the same way as they do smoke, and the family members wouldn't like that. The cigar doesn't go down, and stay at your body.
     The cigarette contains a  lot ofbad materials, such as nicitine and tarr, which could cause a lung cancer.
A lot of people who smoke has a cancer. Cancer is a very dangerous disease. Many people died due to the caner. Smoking can lead us to many other Cancers too. Due to the fact that many people died because of those diseases the docters suggested them to quit smoking .
        Lastly smoing could effect not only you but also your family. When you get married and get a baby the baby sometimes come out in the nomal forms that the others do. It might be better if it only effect you, but it can also effect others and if they are your close friend or even your own children  you would be unhappy and so would the others, and it would be a selfish and not a very smart thing to get other people to hurt.
     Therefore you(people who smoke) should stop smoking. You can go to a cetre or places that can help you quit it. So it's really not good to smoke and if you are smoking you should quit it.